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| My paper reads a lot better, thanks for all of your help. I am glad that you taught me the candy bar strategy. | |
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| Is there anything else that I can help you with on your paper? | |
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| I think that we have covered all of my goals for today. | |
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| No I can't think of anything else. | |
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