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 | Now when you buy an Almond Joy candy bar on the front of the wrapper is states that inside of the wrapper is and almond joy, Right? | |
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| Yes, that is what it would say. | |
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| What if you bought an almond joy candy bar and you opened up the wrapper and there was peanuts instead. How would you feel? | |
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| I would be upset because I wanted an Almond Joy. | |
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| Now your thesis is the wrapper on the candy bar. It is asvertising what is going to happen in your paper. If you don't give the reader what you advertised the reader will be upset. | |
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| Oh! Now I get what I have to do to make my paper better. I can see that in my paper I am not giving the reader what I advertised. | |
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