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 | Hey Ryan, what are you doing? | |
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| Trying not to shot myself while reading this first draft of a story. | |
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| Why, is it that bad? | |
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| I'll say! He has a comma where he should have a period. His perpostional phrase make no sense and don't even get me started on his use of adverbs! | |
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| Let go dude, let it go. | |
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| You need a semicolon there you idiot! | |
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