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 | Ok, I need to gather my thoughts and try to make sense of what I want to write about. | |
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| After going home and writing a first draft, I hand it in to my teacher. |
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| I took a lot of unnecessary sentences out. You tend to write to much and go off topic. | |
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| Ok, thank you. I'm going to try and fix it my rambling! | |
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| After re-writng about 2 more drafts/edits I hand in my final draft. |
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| How did my final draft look? | |
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| It has improved! All the unnecessary information is gone, and the paper sounds much better! | |
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