| Pathos plays a part that is equally important to the construction of the arguments as logos |
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| Phrasing such as,"destroying amicable relationships," and,"planted hatred and suspicion," allows other readers to sympathize. | |
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| Convincing rhetoric can change steadfast opinions |
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