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| I feel kike something is missing in my paper. Maybe I need to change my thesis statement. | |
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| Why do you think that you need to change your thesis statement? | |
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| After reading my paper my thesis statement does not seem to be that strong. | |
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| Maybe you need to add some information that supports your thesis. | |
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| Ok, but I have all of this information down in this paragraph. | |
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