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| Yeah, right, f#*kstick. | |
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| You tightened up the plot, made the characters stronger, and nailed the ending. | |
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| What the f#*k have you ever done, bastard! How dare you disparage my work! | |
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| I'd like to advance you $100,000, and get you out on a book tour immediately. | |
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| I WILL CUT YOUR BEATING HEART FROM YOUR BODY AND EAT IT WHOLE! | |
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