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 | "Hey Jim, I thought your paper was good, I just think it could have had a better thesis". | |
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| "Oh, I guess your right boss now that I am reviewing it." | |
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| "Well I just wanted to refresh your memory a little. A thesis is the main point of your essay and every sentence must somehow relate to it.It is usually found at the end of the introduction paprgrph. | |
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| "Oh yeah now its all coming back to me". | |
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| "The thesis statement is a good way to get the readers attention and I think that is where you ran into trouble.One thing I always remeber when I am writng is a little formula, limited subject + your opinion=your thesis statement. If you remember that formula you'll never go wrong". | |
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| "Gee, thancks boss, now I remember, don't worry I'll have this on your desck properly done by tomorrow." | |
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