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 | look Jose, your essay needs to be credible. You need to corroborate you claims with fact. | |
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| Ok thank you for your help. Miss. S | |
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| Oh and you have a copious amounts of the word "like" in you essay, try to restrain on that. | |
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| Ok, it almost feels as if you are trying to daunt me? | |
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| What! No, now I am in despair because you think that of me. | |
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| I am sorry Miss. S I did not mean to demean you. | |
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