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 | Hey Tim. I was reading your manuscript and it seems pretty (impeccable). I can't find anything wrong with it other than that your topic seems a bit (illusory); like it actually isn't real. | |
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| Yeah, Scott, I hear you. My work process kind of got (hindered) because I had to take my daughter to soccer practice all week. That slowed me down quite a bit so I kind of rushed through it. | |
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| Alright. I'm going to be (impartial) here and treat this like I would any other manuscript. I'll give you a week to go through and revise it. Don't be (impetous) and rush through it this time! | |
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| Thank you so much! I won't have to take my daughter to soccer this week so I won't let anything (inhibit) or slow me down! | |
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| No problem! I'll see you next week. Bye Tim! | |
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| See you later Scott! | |
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