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 | Hey Bob, I'm tying to write a "copious" poem, can you give me some feedback. | |
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| Shure Joe, I can "defer" your poem. | |
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| Once upon a time... | |
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| Joe I don't mean to be "curtail" but a poem shoud never syart with once upon a time, it "debilitates" it. | |
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| Well that is little "despairing". | |
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| Do not worry Joe, you can improve. | |
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