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 | This is not acceptable work young man! You didn't even bother going to a site that is trusted and well known, therefore I will not accept this because you did not use (credible) sources for the information. | |
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| What? I did my research and spent alot of time on this assignment. We all make mistakes, some make few and some make incredibly large (copious) amounts of them. | |
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| I understand what you mean but as a teacher I am not allowed to accept work that does not meet my standards. Believe me I don't want to have to give you a bad grade and make you upset or make you (daunt) your abilities but this work is just bad as bad can be. | |
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| Your feedback isn't helping my situation, all it is doing is putting me down and making me (demean) my self confidence. | |
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| If you can (corroborate) where you found this information, I might be able to help you get a decent grade on this assignment. | |
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| Ok well I went to a few good sites but these were the ones with the most information so that's why I used them. | |
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